Here is an excerpt from an action short film script, I wrote for Blue Rain Pictures. Let me know what you think.
Tyler sits at the wheel of his car, rolling down a deserted highway. He taps the steering wheel in time with the blasted music. He rolls down his window and sticks his head out. Wind blows his hair back, and contorts his cheeks. He takes a deep breath and returns to car. After another mile his SUV begins to sputter, he pulls it over to the side of the road. He begins to walk under the hot desert sun, down the long highway which stretches out to the horizon.
Will Tyler get out of the sun and what will he encounter?